tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6773516563448874562.post440604959802878288..comments2012-03-19T14:17:35.128-07:00Comments on pilgrims and voyagers: the window and the mirror.Im Quinnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01709964919309261333noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6773516563448874562.post-34098143433653790142011-09-16T14:25:04.228-07:002011-09-16T14:25:04.228-07:00As abbs and I talked about this story one of the m...As abbs and I talked about this story one of the moments I missed talking more about what that epiphany. While its somewhat natural, it also was an oppotunity for me to delve more into the mirror/window concept. I struggle to flesh out changes like that but its important for me because those are moments that move stories along. I struggle to not sound cheesy or trite when I talk about those pivotal moments.Im Quinnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01709964919309261333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6773516563448874562.post-52799781652706462082011-09-16T13:30:13.327-07:002011-09-16T13:30:13.327-07:00I also like the vulnerability that the narrator ha...I also like the vulnerability that the narrator has. The epiphany that he has about his woman is really beautiful.Bre Valeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05418249570718031544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6773516563448874562.post-2148861961353866542011-09-15T07:41:56.444-07:002011-09-15T07:41:56.444-07:00I like that the narrator is endearingly flawed...i...I like that the narrator is endearingly flawed...it makes the last paragraph hit hard (I'll admit, I got teary). The last line is gold. GREAT vignette.Abbie Rdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12019420738497782251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6773516563448874562.post-73912833066503871352011-09-15T07:35:27.074-07:002011-09-15T07:35:27.074-07:00I love the insights and I love the ending.I love the insights and I love the ending.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10956056168256756705noreply@blogger.com